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shanellemaree's review against another edition
4.0
This was honestly a super solid mafia-esque romance. Alejandro was fucking insatiable and they fucked for like 80% of the book, but there was also a strong overarching plot too. Alana and Alejandro were a strong couple, and were surprisingly extremely supportive of each other.
Overall, I really enjoyed this and I can’t wait to see what’s next in this world.
Overall, I really enjoyed this and I can’t wait to see what’s next in this world.
madisonleb's review against another edition
3.75
The conclusion to Alana and Alejandro’s story. We pick back up in book two seeing Alana return to Alejandro on her own decision after finding out the truth about her father and her arranged marriage. The script is flipped in this second book, seeing Alejandro become insecure due to An ex of Alana’s making an appearance. The main climax consisted of a close-to-successful hit, a deranged uncle, & a kidnapped duo. Things are wrapped nicely in a bow by the ending, including sweet Lucia finally finding her true family.
I enjoyed reading this story, but I felt like it was all over the place a lot of the time. There were multiple plots going on; the Ortega’s, Lucia’s previous family & status of people maybe wanting her dead, Bobby, Alana’s father still being mentioned, a mystery behind Mateo’s shooting, the kidnapping, etc. Some stories felt out of left field, like the Ortega’s. I don’t even know how that came to be an issue for the Montoya’s.
Also, not sure if this was a choice by the author or a mistake by the editor/publisher, but the lack of real quotation marks absolutely enraged me. It’s something about ‘this being used for dialogue’ instead of “these actual quotation marks” that makes it’s very difficult for me to understand. I hated that.
I enjoyed reading this story, but I felt like it was all over the place a lot of the time. There were multiple plots going on; the Ortega’s, Lucia’s previous family & status of people maybe wanting her dead, Bobby, Alana’s father still being mentioned, a mystery behind Mateo’s shooting, the kidnapping, etc. Some stories felt out of left field, like the Ortega’s. I don’t even know how that came to be an issue for the Montoya’s.
Also, not sure if this was a choice by the author or a mistake by the editor/publisher, but the lack of real quotation marks absolutely enraged me. It’s something about ‘this being used for dialogue’ instead of “these actual quotation marks” that makes it’s very difficult for me to understand. I hated that.
lyssalandart's review against another edition
adventurous
lighthearted
mysterious
tense
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
anikop's review
3.0
The first book really didn't have a huge plot. This filled in a couple holes but not much.
This book was predictable and it would have been nice to see the ex boyfriend Bobby team up with Carlos in the kidnapping.
Everything was just repetitive sex scenes over and over.
Everything the MMC Spoke to Jax his right hand man they called eachother amigo. Every once in a while that's okay but every damn line is super ANNOYING.
The MMC kept calling the FMC princess every damn line too. We are adults reading this book. We know that they are talking to eachother. I understand term of endearment but wow.
Epub version did not have quotations for when people spoke which may have been a typo but I wish it did. I don't blame the author for that though.
While Alana was gone she bit a man's penis off. When she spoke about it with the mmc she called it his "thing"
YOU ARE A 25 YEAR OLD WOMAN WHO HAS BEEN HAVING SEX MULTIPLE TIMES EVERY SINGLE DAY FOR THE PAST 7 MONTHS. SAY DICK OR PENIS LIKE AN ADULT.
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This book was predictable and it would have been nice to see the ex boyfriend Bobby team up with Carlos in the kidnapping.
Everything was just repetitive sex scenes over and over.
Everything the MMC Spoke to Jax his right hand man they called eachother amigo. Every once in a while that's okay but every damn line is super ANNOYING.
The MMC kept calling the FMC princess every damn line too. We are adults reading this book. We know that they are talking to eachother. I understand term of endearment but wow.
Epub version did not have quotations for when people spoke which may have been a typo but I wish it did. I don't blame the author for that though.
While Alana was gone she bit a man's penis off. When she spoke about it with the mmc she called it his "thing"
YOU ARE A 25 YEAR OLD WOMAN WHO HAS BEEN HAVING SEX MULTIPLE TIMES EVERY SINGLE DAY FOR THE PAST 7 MONTHS. SAY DICK OR PENIS LIKE AN ADULT.
⭐️⭐️⭐️
bethhhx3's review against another edition
dark
tense
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
2.5
amylou_98's review against another edition
challenging
dark
emotional
hopeful
sad
tense
fast-paced
5.0
sroycereads's review against another edition
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0