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Baby Makes Five by Nicole Peters

clak5686's review

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3.0

First, let me say that I enjoyed the story. However, there were more editing errors than I have ever seen in one book. I did find that to be a distraction because I frequently had to re-read sentences to make sure I know that was really being said. Ash King and Miah Price have a one night stand in the Bahamas. She regrets it because it is not her personality. But, she is comforted by the fact that she never has to see him again. Then, Miah finds out she's pregnant. She runs into Ash at the hospital where she had a doctor's appointment. He finds out she's pregnant and he wants to be part of the babies lives. Ash and Miah get to know each other. Unfortunately, Miah falls for Ash. But, she knows that he doesn't love her and she can't abide his hot/cold personality. Needless to say, things happen between them and related to the pregnancy. The books has a happy ending which was well done.

sveak's review

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2.0

I would have liked it better if the author knew how to use punctuation - it made following the story a bit confusing.