Cute and funny GFY with excellent smouldering chemistry. My only complaint was the same as most other reviewers, the off page sex scene. The author had done such a good job rachetting up the sexual tension in the warehouse scene that I'm sure she could have pulled it off.

J'avais adoré [b:Breathing Again|30641226|Breathing Again|Sofia Grey|https://i.gr-assets.com/images/S/compressed.photo.goodreads.com/books/1466215199l/30641226._SY75_.jpg|46163967], de Sofia Grey, du coup, j'avais très envie de retrouver cette écriture qui m'avait tant plue, et ce dans une nouvelle histoire. On a ici un GFY mignon et sexy, une histoire qui a du potentiel mais qui, format nouvelle oblige, est trop court à mon goût. De plus,l'auteur commet le sacrilège suprême en laissant de côté LE passage qu'on veut toutes lire, bonjour la frustration ! Une petite lecture sympa donc, mais qui me laisse quand même un peu sur ma faim !

This was well on it's way to being a 5 star read. It had everything I love in a story, hot chemistry, likable characters, it was well written. Well, it had ALMOST everything I love in a story, but after lots of sexual tension and one really hot blow job, the scene cut to the morning after, and skipped ALL the gay for you first time sex stuff.


First time bottoming, first time giving a blow job, frotting, all that was totally skipped with just a vague recollection the next morning. So yeah, I regrettably had to bump this totally 5 star read down to 4, just because of my disappointment.

But it was a really good story! Thanks to the author for sharing her time and words, and I will be reading more!

I like that the story wasn't BDSM even though the prompt and the cover made you think it was. It was actually a perfect GFY story.

Quick and hot - the photo shoot scene had so much ust!

*** 3.5 Stars ***

If not for the totally bullshit fade to black on Dan and Jamie's first time together (not to mention the fact that it was Dan's maiden voyage on HMS Butt Sex!), this would have been a 4 star read for me. I really enjoyed the build-up as Dan slowly came to some very personal realizations, as well as the chemistry between Dan and Jamie. The coming out scene and the epilogue seemed rushed and - dare I suggest?! - unnecessary, but both were sweet in their own ways.

However... A severe lack of on-the-page butt sex makes me one Grumpy Cat.



As always, my thanks to the author for participating in the Love's Landscapes event and for all of the behind-the-scenes work that editors, beta readers, and the MM Group Mods put into making this FREE event a massive success!

I'm probably more than just a bit biased here lol. First of all, this is my prompt, and of course, being involved in the whole event...

I couldn't be happier where Sofia took my request though. And I can't thank her enough!

I usually am not a fan of GFY stories at all. I still really liked this story.That is a big deal for me.This story has two really interesting main characters.I like Sofia Grey's writing style. Still had some issues with little things here and there, but it was good.Could have done without the short little epilogue for one. Didn't see the point of it.I will talk about the story in a video on my channel later this month.