Much more adventurous than the first book. The ending was full of twists and heartbreak. Amazingly devastating. 

I wanted so incredibly to enjoy this, to fall in love with Priya, Malini, and Bhumika all over again, the casual lesbian and South Asian rep, the wonderful magic system, but I really didn’t, and am so heartbroken that that is so.

For the same page length as the first book in the series, this book was just so much more slow-paced, from start to finish. Throughout reading the book I was continuously waiting for the pacing to change, for the dramatic scenes and tension and plot points to all come together perfectly in the end, but nothing like that really happened at all.

Far too much of this book was Parijatdvipan politics, where Malini “cleverly schemes and manipulates” her subjects, when really what Malini does takes hardly any skill at all. Her character in general throughout this book fell so far down from her development in book 1. She’s just turned into this emotionless, manipulative, one-dimensional and flat character that I can hardly connect to, especially when she still acts so calculating with Priya, who acts like a practical loyal servant to Malini. Their relationship seems so incredibly unbalanced, with Malini blatantly using Priya for her gifts, which is intended, but I still disliked, and Priya is a submissive slave toward Malini, who forgives every bad thing she does and is just absolutely so blind to the darkness of her character. Both Priya and Malini in this book made me like Bhumika SO much more than the both of them; her arc and plot being so much more interesting than the main characters’ definitely says something. If this book was all Bhumika I might have actually enjoyed it more!

It is also implied that Parijatdvipa colonised Ahiranya in the first book, and that was handled so poorly in this book. The colonised (Ahiranya) are blamed and demonised by the majority of Parijatdvipa, calling “Priya’s kind” unnatural, witches, and this kind of stuff is just accepted and not classified as discriminatory and something that needs to be reversed. So adding that plot point and making the main relationship in the book between the colonised and the coloniser as some sort of “enemies to lovers” I am only now understanding after reading this book is just so weird, because, when writing a fantasy novel, you have the very obvious option to not include discrimination, yet this world has so much racism and misogyny that did not need to be added.

And the povs 😫 There were so many unnecessary character perspective chapters, like Malini’s once-mentioned maid, and Chandra, who is obviously an asshole and I didn’t need his chapters to know that. This book just seemed like such a chore to get through, and for it to not even end up being worth it in the end I am just disappointed.