It was better than the last book, writing-wise, but still had a massive over use of adjectives, especially adjectives that didn't need to be adjectives. For example, there were phrases along the lines of "she tugged at the waistband of her now-too-big-for-her designer jeans". It made reading the book harder than it should of been.

The plot is thickening and is still interesting and captivating and is still the main thing keeping me going with this series.