A review by maggiestraveledbookshelf
Vows & Ruins by Helen Scheuerer

adventurous medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? No

3.0

๐Ÿ“– Vows & Ruins
๐Ÿ“š Book 2 of The Legends of Thezmarr series
โœ๐Ÿป Helen Scheuerer
โ˜‘๏ธ Romantasy
Rating: โญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ
Spice: ๐ŸŒถ๏ธ๐ŸŒถ๏ธ๐ŸŒถ๏ธ๐ŸŒถ๏ธ

โ€œ๐™”๐™ค๐™ช ๐™๐™–๐™ซ๐™š ๐™ฃ๐™ค ๐™ž๐™™๐™š๐™– ๐™๐™ค๐™ฌ ๐™ข๐™ช๐™˜๐™ ๐™„ ๐™ฌ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™ฉ ๐™ฎ๐™ค๐™ช. ๐™ƒ๐™ค๐™ฌ ๐™„ ๐™—๐™ช๐™ง๐™ฃ ๐™›๐™ค๐™ง ๐™ฎ๐™ค๐™ช. ๐™”๐™ค๐™ช ๐™ก๐™ž๐™ฉ ๐™–๐™ฃ ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™›๐™š๐™ง๐™ฃ๐™ค ๐™ฌ๐™ž๐™ฉ๐™๐™ž๐™ฃ ๐™ข๐™š ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™™ ๐™ž๐™ฉ ๐™ฌ๐™ค๐™ฃโ€™๐™ฉ ๐™จ๐™ฉ๐™ค๐™ฅ.โ€

This one sadly didnโ€™t work for me.

Overview:
โ€ขMentor MMC x Mentee FMC
โ€ขMagic Training
โ€ขDual POV
โ€ขLOTS of Spice
โ€ขBattle Sequences 

๐—ช๐—ถ๐˜๐—ต ๐˜€๐—ฒ๐—ฐ๐—ฟ๐—ฒ๐˜๐˜€ ๐˜‚๐—ป๐—ฟ๐—ฎ๐˜ƒ๐—ฒ๐—น๐—น๐—ถ๐—ป๐—ด ๐—ฎ๐—ป๐—ฑ ๐—ฒ๐˜ƒ๐—ถ๐—น ๐—ฐ๐—น๐—ผ๐˜€๐—ถ๐—ป๐—ด ๐—ถ๐—ป, ๐—ง๐—ต๐—ฒ๐—ฎ ๐—ฎ๐—ป๐—ฑ ๐—ช๐—ถ๐—น๐—ฑ๐—ฒ๐—ฟ ๐—ณ๐—ถ๐—ด๐—ต๐˜ ๐˜๐—ผ ๐˜€๐—ฎ๐˜ƒ๐—ฒ ๐˜๐—ต๐—ฒ ๐˜„๐—ผ๐—ฟ๐—น๐—ฑ, ๐—ฎ๐—ป๐—ฑ ๐—ฒ๐—ฎ๐—ฐ๐—ต ๐—ผ๐˜๐—ต๐—ฒ๐—ฟ. ๐—ง๐—ต๐—ฒ ๐—ณ๐—ฎ๐˜๐—ฒ ๐—ผ๐—ณ ๐˜๐—ต๐—ฒ ๐—ฟ๐—ฒ๐—ฎ๐—น๐—บ๐˜€ ๐—ฟ๐—ฒ๐˜€๐˜๐˜€ ๐—ถ๐—ป ๐˜๐—ต๐—ฒ๐—ถ๐—ฟ ๐—ต๐—ฎ๐—ป๐—ฑ๐˜€ - ๐˜„๐—ถ๐—น๐—น ๐˜๐—ต๐—ฒ๐˜† ๐—ฒ๐—บ๐—ฒ๐—ฟ๐—ด๐—ฒ ๐˜ƒ๐—ถ๐—ฐ๐˜๐—ผ๐—ฟ๐—ถ๐—ผ๐˜‚๐˜€, ๐—ผ๐—ฟ ๐˜„๐—ถ๐—น๐—น ๐˜๐—ต๐—ฒ ๐—ฑ๐—ฎ๐—ฟ๐—ธ๐—ป๐—ฒ๐˜€๐˜€ ๐—ฐ๐—ผ๐—ป๐˜€๐˜‚๐—บ๐—ฒ ๐˜๐—ต๐—ฒ๐—บ ๐—ฏ๐—ผ๐˜๐—ต?

Letโ€™s start with the parts I enjoyed: 

I still love the Found Family between Thea, Kipp, and Cal. Their chemistry and banter brought much needed levity.

โ€˜๐™’๐™๐™–๐™ฉ ๐™–๐™ง๐™š ๐™ฎ๐™ค๐™ช ๐™™๐™ค๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™๐™š๐™ง๐™š?โ€™ ๐™จ๐™๐™š ๐™–๐™จ๐™ ๐™š๐™™.
โ€˜๐™’๐™ง๐™ž๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™– ๐™›๐™ช๐™˜๐™ ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™จ๐™ค๐™ฃ๐™ฃ๐™š๐™ฉ, ๐™”๐™ค๐™ช๐™ง ๐™ƒ๐™ž๐™œ๐™๐™ฃ๐™š๐™จ๐™จ,โ€™ ๐™†๐™ž๐™ฅ๐™ฅ ๐™ง๐™š๐™ฅ๐™ก๐™ž๐™š๐™™. โ€˜๐™’๐™๐™–๐™ฉโ€™๐™จ ๐™ž๐™ฉ ๐™ก๐™ค๐™ค๐™  ๐™ก๐™ž๐™ ๐™š?โ€™

Wilder supported Thea through her training and her battles, and I love how he seems in awe of her.

โ€œ๐™Ž๐™๐™š ๐™ฃ๐™š๐™ซ๐™š๐™ง ๐™›๐™ก๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™˜๐™๐™š๐™™, ๐™ฃ๐™š๐™ซ๐™š๐™ง ๐™๐™š๐™จ๐™ž๐™ฉ๐™–๐™ฉ๐™š๐™™, ๐™ฃ๐™š๐™ซ๐™š๐™ง ๐™œ๐™–๐™ซ๐™š ๐™ช๐™ฅ, ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™™ ๐™’๐™ž๐™ก๐™™๐™š๐™ง ๐™˜๐™ค๐™ช๐™ก๐™™๐™ฃโ€™๐™ฉ ๐™๐™š๐™ก๐™ฅ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š ๐™จ๐™ฌ๐™š๐™ก๐™ก ๐™ค๐™› ๐™ฅ๐™ง๐™ž๐™™๐™š ๐™ž๐™ฃ ๐™๐™ž๐™จ ๐™˜๐™๐™š๐™จ๐™ฉ ๐™–๐™ฉ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™–๐™ฉ.โ€

Okay. Itโ€™s possible that I had too high of expectations, or maybe Iโ€™m in a fantasy slump, but there are several aspects that frustrated me.

First of all, Iโ€™m all for spicy scenes. But this was a ridiculous amount of smut. It didnโ€™t matter what was happening in the plot, they were sneaking away to have sex. It just felt so unnecessary, and it honestly made me like them less as characters that they focused on only themselves in certain situationsโ€ฆ

โ€œ๐™Ž๐™๐™š ๐™ฌ๐™–๐™จ ๐™ฉ๐™ค๐™ง๐™ฃ ๐™—๐™š๐™ฉ๐™ฌ๐™š๐™š๐™ฃ ๐™ฌ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™ฉ๐™ค ๐™™๐™š๐™ซ๐™ค๐™ช๐™ง ๐™๐™ž๐™ข ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™™ ๐™ฌ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™ฉ๐™ค ๐™จ๐™–๐™ซ๐™ค๐™ช๐™ง ๐™ฉ๐™๐™ž๐™จ ๐™—๐™š๐™–๐™ช๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™›๐™ช๐™ก ๐™ฉ๐™๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™—๐™š๐™ฉ๐™ฌ๐™š๐™š๐™ฃ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š๐™ข, ๐™๐™š๐™ง ๐™—๐™ค๐™™๐™ฎ ๐™ฉ๐™ช๐™ง๐™ฃ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™ฉ๐™ค ๐™ก๐™ž๐™ฆ๐™ช๐™ž๐™™ ๐™—๐™š๐™ฃ๐™š๐™–๐™ฉ๐™ ๐™๐™ž๐™จ ๐™ฉ๐™ค๐™ช๐™˜๐™.โ€

Second of all, the plot seemed to barely move forward. There were a few secrets revealed, but it just didnโ€™t have enough momentum or structure throughout the narrative.

Lastly, for supposed โ€œsecretsโ€, there was little care for discretion when they were in public spaces, readily talking about all types of secrets while people can easily overhear. 

I wanted more of the magic and the fantasy world elements!! Hopefully those will come more in the next books, and I think Iโ€™ll try to keep readingโ€ฆ after a break.


Overall, Iโ€™m not sure I would recommend this series yet. To be determined. 

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