The writing was solid, the concept interesting. But I always feel like short stories need some sort of thesis or reasoning for being short. This didn't seem to hold any point other than some men suck... And it really held no punch or point for being a short story. It just felt like the idea of a full length novel and would have held more catharsis if it had been longer and could have let you feel anything build. 

Overall it was interesting, but it fell flat for me.