2.5  out of 5 stars 
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I really wanted to love this book and I really thought I would seeing that I loved her debut novel everything, everything but up just not liking it as much as I had hoped. 
The writing was just as amazing as it was in everything, everything. It was so poetic and beautiful. So I had no problem with that. 
I think my biggest problem was It took place in one day, I feel like I would have enjoyed it more if it had taken place in a couple of weeks instead of just one day. I wish we got to see more of their relationship with their families and see them work on their relationship. I just felt like it went too fast and I would have liked to learn more about them and their families and less about the love. 
And the whole chapter thing I liked being able to see from both of their point of view but I didn't really enjoy the point of view. I felt like they were unnecessary to the story and a few times I even skipped through parts. 
Other than that everything else was pretty good.