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A review by weathersreadsgarbage
Coming Up for Air by Amanda Meuwissen
adventurous
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
1.0
This would probably be fine for another type of reader but honestly? I got bored.
It reads like the author is very young. Little to no understanding of how the world works, awful dialogue, inconsistent logic, etc. I could handle it in a fanfic but I expect more from something that's presented as original work. I was personally hoping for a bit more grit from the premise, but this is very low stakes.
It reads like the author is very young. Little to no understanding of how the world works, awful dialogue, inconsistent logic, etc. I could handle it in a fanfic but I expect more from something that's presented as original work. I was personally hoping for a bit more grit from the premise, but this is very low stakes.