Picked this up based on a GR Friend's review and that it's free. The friend's review was dead-on that it is a good story with likable characters badly in need of editing.https://www.goodreads.com/review/show/1947644910. The misuse of words and missing comments are prevalent enough to be distracting. In spite of the flaws, it was good enough that I took a chance on book 2.