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A review by coffeeinlibraries
See You Soon by Lexie Axelson
Did not finish book.
DNF @ 30%. I’m actually pretty bummed about this.
I thought our MMC was going to be mysterious, alluring, and possessively all about our FMC. Nerp, he’s literally just another typical stupid male.
Ari told him about her mentally and physically abusive ex and what does this idiot do? Rejects her because another female was blowing up his phone reminding him that he’s ‘not the relationship type’ and ‘she’s Paul’s little sister’ then turns around a couple days later and openly flaunts another woman in front of her at a bar AND gets a blowjob from said woman in the bathroom where Ari literally runs into them! THEN, Danny only acknowledges her to come to her rescue when Ari’s ex tries to dance with her.
AND WHAT DOES ARI DO YOU MIGHT ASK??? Melts. Like a goddamn popsicle on the hottest day of the dang year and just “has to talk to Danny”
WUT?? no! Where’s the backbone?! Where’s the triumph in walking away like he doesn’t matter?! YOUVE KNOWN HIM FOR A WHOLE WHOPPIN’ WEEK, there should be no commitment to a man who literally admitted you were only at his house for one last hoorah before deploying AND THEN REJECTED YOU. I’m begging you, where is the backbone??
Aside from that, this reads like a rough draft. It’s choppy, the dialogue is weird and honestly I don’t like anyone besides Paul and well… he’s dead soooo
Damn you TikTok for tricking me.
I thought our MMC was going to be mysterious, alluring, and possessively all about our FMC. Nerp, he’s literally just another typical stupid male.
Ari told him about her mentally and physically abusive ex and what does this idiot do? Rejects her because another female was blowing up his phone reminding him that he’s ‘not the relationship type’ and ‘she’s Paul’s little sister’ then turns around a couple days later and openly flaunts another woman in front of her at a bar AND gets a blowjob from said woman in the bathroom where Ari literally runs into them! THEN, Danny only acknowledges her to come to her rescue when Ari’s ex tries to dance with her.
AND WHAT DOES ARI DO YOU MIGHT ASK??? Melts. Like a goddamn popsicle on the hottest day of the dang year and just “has to talk to Danny”
WUT?? no! Where’s the backbone?! Where’s the triumph in walking away like he doesn’t matter?! YOUVE KNOWN HIM FOR A WHOLE WHOPPIN’ WEEK, there should be no commitment to a man who literally admitted you were only at his house for one last hoorah before deploying AND THEN REJECTED YOU. I’m begging you, where is the backbone??
Aside from that, this reads like a rough draft. It’s choppy, the dialogue is weird and honestly I don’t like anyone besides Paul and well… he’s dead soooo
Damn you TikTok for tricking me.