As far as sequels go, this was definitely better than the first book. The plot was outrageous and ridiculous in terms of believability, but I suppose that reflects the age demographic it's aimed at. That being said it was a quick, good read. 

The plot was basic, following the same sort of formula as the previous book. I enjoyed seeing how the characters had grown a bit and forged new dynamics with their relationships too since the previous book, though it was all told wuite literally with the words "you see...". But as far as character development goes, that's where the good things stop. I feel like there was no actual personality growth and the personalities were just forced upon us rather than developed through the story. I think that's how the author writes in general; telling rather than showing. I suppose it might work for this book as it's for a younger audience but it ruined the reading experience for me. 

Huge spoiler warning!

justice for shelby! There was absolutely no need to kill her off. Yes she was dislikable and she honestly annoyed me in both the first and second book, but that's only because there was NO room for her to develop! It would’ve honestly been a much more impactful book if we had more insight into Shelby, and it would've allowed for Lauren to grow as a person too

It might just be me but I definitely think that books that are aimed at younger readers should have characters that actually grow and change, especially if they are initially portrayed to be not-so-good.

Overall it was an okay book, not the best, even for younger readers.