this was cute but needed at least fifty pages of marco and wick time. they were strangers but were saying i love you after having a couple of threesomes. i think they had like one date. we spent so much time on addressing family and society and we should’ve spent that time with building their romance imo. hell if could’ve cut down the smut spent it with them would’ve been better. 

i think when it came to meg and the guys the relationship building was done well. she knew them both for a long time and we saw her interact with them enough that it worked out.