The story initially captured my attention and so I wanted more and saw it through. About 25-35% of the way through it became highly predictable and the author's inability to use proper grammar was grating on my nerves but I still felt a need to see it through so the story was decent, though done a thousand times before.

I highly recommend that De Jong get an editor, or a new one if she did in fact use one. Poor grammar down to not knowing the difference between there and their is discouraging to see and brings out my '#nohopeforhumanrace' attitude when seeing it published like this. That aside... what started out as a young adult finding her way in life turned into a steamy romance - not my cup or tea but again stuck with it and did get the expected (and likely desired by most ending).