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A review by wilybooklover
The Comeback by Lily Chu

emotional slow-paced

2.0

I think the thing that annoyed me the most about this book was that it had the potential to be so good, and it was a huge letdown. The bones were there, but the execution was lacking. The first third was mostly great and it slowly went downhill from there.

First of all, the book was way too long and slow-paced. There were whole long sections in there focusing on the heroine's days at work and her repetitive musings about work that could have been significantly cut down without losing anything. We never even get to see her meet two of the hero's bandmates, which I think would have made a much better use of the page-time. I'll come back to this part later, but the last quarter of the book was full of unnecessary melodrama that also went on for way too long. It felt like it needed a really good edit.

It pains me to say this, because I usually love 'unlikeable' heroines, but being in Ari's head was an exercise in frustration. If she were just somewhat less judgmental, pessimistic, and wilfully ignorant, I would've liked this book a lot more. I think part of the reason the book felt so long is how negative and closed-off she was about almost everything. And every time she had an epiphany about something, she'd seemingly forget all about it by the next chapter.

Now, back to what I said about the last quarter of the book. The thing that mainly kept me reading this book was how much I loved the hero, Jihoon, but his refusal to really listen to and understand Ari's qualms about his fame began to get on my nerves at this point.
This is then compounded by the third-act conflict, where his decision not to go against his company to defend her reputation (after a picture of them goes viral and the company decide to malign her) really did not make sense with his previous characterisation and soured me on him. Ari also did not make sense at this point, with her insistence on wanting to take their relationship public when she had previously been serious about her privacy and knew that Jihoon wasn't allowed to be seen publicly dating. It all felt so unnecessary and overdramatic. I would have much rather seen them work through the conflict together, but instead they break up (AGAIN) and spend longer apart than they actually spent together throughout the whole book. They only reconcile in the very last chapter and the epilogue doesn't even have them on page together!

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