A cute ...side? Story to what Hermione was doing and feeling during the original story. While I don’t think the author quite managed to mimic Rowling’s narrative voice I think she did a great job filling in the details all the same


Truly the main things that took me out of the story were the small inconsistencies with this and the main series (notably that hermione knew the muffliato charm despite that being something they learn in 6th year from Snapes potion book)


Also, I didn’t LOVE hermiones parents, I always viewed them as more loving than they came off in the books but it did set up a nice relationship that explains how hermione was so easily able to just kind of forget about them after a few years