The Good:

There is some fantastic writing, character development, and world building in this book. Though we are primarily given the perspective of Scorio there are a couple of “interludes” that give some glimpses into the minds of other key characters. Through Scorio’s eyes, the whole world is new and largely unknown–even frightening at times. He makes an excellent character for introducing the readers to the world of pit fiends and mana leveling. Scorio also is introduced without knowing anything about himself or his past. This allows the readers to learn more about his character as he does, making for fewer exposition moments in which characters tell us their characteristics but do not demonstrate them at all. The mana leveling system is explained in a way that doesn’t feel out of place but a natural progression of the training Scorio undertakes. Side characters are fleshed out for the most part, and despite the multiple false climaxes throughout the action in the book the final climax is a genuinely satisfying one. Altogether, you can tell that this book was a labor of love for the fantasy genre and an excellent demonstration of writing skills.

The Meh:

My only real issue with the book is how unnecessarily purple prose-y it can get. The first ten to twelve chapters are full of overly long descriptions utilizing twice as many words as necessary. As someone who’s written fantasy myself, I know how tempting it can be to throw in all those extra words especially when establishing the tone and setting for the story. But don’t let those first few chapters stop you from making it to the meatier parts–the extra wordiness doesn’t entirely disappear but gets a lot more streamlined as the novel progresses.

Final Thoughts:

This is a fantasy novel that I whole heartedly recommend to the fellow fantasy readers who’re a little tired of reading the same progression of tropes and plot points over and over again. The first few chapters can be a bit difficult to chew through, since both reader and characters are largely unsure of what’s going on, but as the story progresses the characters become far more interesting, the world developed, and the magic system reveals itself in very cool ways. In a few scenes, the next plot point reveals itself a bit too early, but despite this it’s still intriguing to see how the situation will play out and what the reaction will be. Scorio is unpredictable, both as a character and as a narrator, and often makes choices that surprise reader and side characters alike. There are several climactic moments in the book leading up to the final challenge, and though one of those action packed sequences seems the most daunting of them all it doesn’t entirely stand out against the real plot of the story. It pokes its head up, makes itself known, and then sinks back down so the readers can reenter the main story. All in all, a fascinating read with a clear progression of power, well rounded characters, and some seriously great scenes for character development and action alike.

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