it felt like it was trying to hard, like the author really wanted it to be highlighted. i found that the character whose pov we read from had little personality beyond sad relatability, if you were to ask me to describe her all i could say is she’s sad and wants a kid. admittedly, i didn’t get very far, but i feel that a character driven book needs to have more interesting characters. hope that others could enjoy it, and i think the author has potential, but needs to focus more on storytelling/character building instead of forcing a pretty sentence into every other paragraph.