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A review by mileapo
Empress of Fae by Briar Boleyn
1.0
this has really gone done hill as each book goes on. the first one, despite its flaws, i did enjoy and was intrigued about where it was going. i am stupid. i thought the second book was a painful read, boy was i not ready for the pain the third would inflict on me.
how is it that as the books go on the writing has become WORSE. the spelling mistakes, the inhuman and awkward interactions, the abrupt tone changes. its a fucking mess. morgan has the most unreliable moral compass and after all she has been through is insanely trusting of strangers. how does she keep falling for people who smile. they’re the biggest liars out here WAKE UP. tyre was the traitor?? ohhh wowwww who would have seen that coming?? oh yeah ME. !
the bad dialogue did no favours when bringing a beloved character back to life. their catch up/make up talk was so fucking flat. i did like lancelet in the first book but jesus christ u slaughtered her character this book lmfao. i did Not care if she lived or died, there was no connection there for me.
personally morgan forgave draven way too fucking fast. basically 10% in and shes like :( my husband<3 miss him<3 like okay damn u miss him. fair. but you have to rebuild the trust up from zero because that was a fucking blow he unleashed at the end of book 2. she made a whole ordeal over it too, only to then be like oh no… i shouldn't have left like that. 2 days later. wow.
“my little silver one” GAG. this is an awful pet name. i would expect this as more of a parent to their child name not from ur HUSBAND.
if there is another book to come, please PLEASE watch human beings talk for five minutes. you have the craziest structure in ur dialogue that is either flat or erratic. its so unnatural. “you lovely girl. my darling niece.” LMFAOOOO WHOOOOO IS TALKING LIKE THIS.
finally, PLEASE LET THE HOSTILITY TOWARDS JAVER GO. IM SICK OF IT. i think he’s committed the least crimes in your whole circle and yet u STILL hold him accountable for beks’ death. grow up.
edit: im sorry javer’s death scene…. i have to LAUGH. what the fuck lmfaooooo
how is it that as the books go on the writing has become WORSE. the spelling mistakes, the inhuman and awkward interactions, the abrupt tone changes. its a fucking mess. morgan has the most unreliable moral compass and after all she has been through is insanely trusting of strangers. how does she keep falling for people who smile. they’re the biggest liars out here WAKE UP. tyre was the traitor?? ohhh wowwww who would have seen that coming?? oh yeah ME. !
the bad dialogue did no favours when bringing a beloved character back to life. their catch up/make up talk was so fucking flat. i did like lancelet in the first book but jesus christ u slaughtered her character this book lmfao. i did Not care if she lived or died, there was no connection there for me.
personally morgan forgave draven way too fucking fast. basically 10% in and shes like :( my husband<3 miss him<3 like okay damn u miss him. fair. but you have to rebuild the trust up from zero because that was a fucking blow he unleashed at the end of book 2. she made a whole ordeal over it too, only to then be like oh no… i shouldn't have left like that. 2 days later. wow.
“my little silver one” GAG. this is an awful pet name. i would expect this as more of a parent to their child name not from ur HUSBAND.
if there is another book to come, please PLEASE watch human beings talk for five minutes. you have the craziest structure in ur dialogue that is either flat or erratic. its so unnatural. “you lovely girl. my darling niece.” LMFAOOOO WHOOOOO IS TALKING LIKE THIS.
finally, PLEASE LET THE HOSTILITY TOWARDS JAVER GO. IM SICK OF IT. i think he’s committed the least crimes in your whole circle and yet u STILL hold him accountable for beks’ death. grow up.
edit: im sorry javer’s death scene…. i have to LAUGH. what the fuck lmfaooooo