once again i prefer the mm relationships to the mf relationships. all she gets is insta love and lust while the guys get to know each other slowly. at some point it feels like cheating when she added the new guy. it’s so insta it made no sense. whatevs

anyway

the relationship angst on top of all the politicking was too much. it’s book four! i wish they would settle their relationship issues already.

the mfc is annoying. she complains about not being powerful but never bothers to ask to be trained except once in book two. harper literally always tries his best to build on his skills even though he is not the strongest which is admirable and interesting to read. she never tries. the guys keep telling her she’s amazing and that it’s okay and it is believable for the guys to like that but as the reader it makes her chapters boring. she’s always crying but does nothing. erritt cries a lot too but he does a lot. even when it comes to relationship drama she never handles it well. so why should i root for her? sure i don’t want to get caught but she’s just not enjoyable characters to follow.

also the timeline is so confusing. how long is a month? in the beginning of the book they’d been there for three months now it’s six? i’m so confused but i can ignore it.

on to the next book!