Dramis is a promising young writer. The concept is engaging and the plot is full throttle the entire time. 5⭐️ on entertainment value. However, the writing can be wordy and confusing. Many side characters serve little to no purpose, they’re two dimensional, and because of that there is no investment as a reader. Some plot lines are never resolved or even touched upon more than twice. A lot of telling not showing. And finally, the writing is always hyperbolic. Everything is life or death. Every conversation, scene, and moment is at the highest emotional point. When every sentence is the highest is can be emotionally, they loose strength. The climaxes don’t feel earned because there isn’t proper build. Again, entertaining as ever. Dramis has a lot of potential and I cannot wait for the next book! The writing just needs improvement.