It think this book had a lot of potential and the bones of the story was set up really well.
The romance, connection and love between Joy and Blaze was really beautiful and made you want to cherish it for the rest of your life.
The conversations were really the best parts of the story because we got to see them as a whole outside of their mind.
I also loved the way the time jumps came to be, it moved flawlessly through to the next scenes.

To the not so great parts…
There was a lot of telling instead of showing.
For as short as the book was many repeated lines and phrases throughout.
It sounded like it was trying to be written as a play with every single moment had to be explained within their thoughts as super in depth and poetic instead just letting them be humans.
There was a scene that ended up being repeated, I’m assuming it was an accident during formatting.

I appreciated what the author was trying to do but it could have been so much more.