this is the second thing that ive read by kyusaku yumeno and i really liked it!! im a big fan of his writing style. it was a really short story that i just randomly stumbled across online in pdf form and i was SO excited. i enjoyed reading this but i was a little confused what was going on between the siblings? i dont understand what their "sin" was!! it was not very clear at all but i THINK they like fell in love or something. i think the religious connections were really interesting and how similar this was to the garden of eden and the temptation of the snake/demon was REALLY cool. showed themes of religious trauma and suicidal ideation and im always a big fan of those. great short story!!