Okay, I wouldn’t usually count a DNF as “read” but I suffered through 61% of this atrocity so I’m putting it toward my reading goal 😂 I got this book free from the kindle store a while back and… thank god it was free. I really don’t like to hate on books but I have no idea how this made it out of the very first rough draft. 

Endless typos, gems tricks errors, accidental repeated scenes, name changes when talking about the same person. I’m not sure literally anyone read this after the author wrote it 🙃🙃

Also some of the comparison during the spicy scenes absolutely killed me!!!! Comparing a bl0wj0b to sucking juice out of a pickle and sucking t!ts to a dog licking peanut butter…. Just why lmao

I truly felt like my 13 year old self could’ve written this book in one take and it would’ve turned out the same