it reads very juvenile and main character is not who i want to follow. she’s stuck at school while one mmc leads out and about doing a lot that i want to see. 

one of f the potential romantic interests is not redeemable. if we are going to say her half sister is evil then he is too. they are both a products of their environment. another thing is the author keeps calling her half sister step sister. i wish the author would stop calling her that. 

also why is the mfcs mom out and about? she literally was just release as a hostage???? 

anyway the first book was good enough for me so i’ll stop here.