The author's vision for this book surpasses her current writing abilities. Inconsistent language and underdeveloped characters hindered immersion in what could be a captivating world. A seasoned editor could have significantly improved this story. 

The plot's strength lies in the action sequences, but world-building and pacing issues create confusion. Essential details are over-explained, while crucial world history remains vague. A slower introduction to the world would have been beneficial. 

While romance can enhance a fantasy, it should never overshadow the plot. This novel prioritizes romantic elements over the complex world it attempts to build. A more focused approach on plot development would elevate the story. 

Ultimately, this book falls short of its potential as a complex fantasy.