this ended up being kind of a garbled mess.  why bother with multiple perspectives if everything is going to have the same authorial voice???  it's just confusing at that point.  

you can tell this was written by a poet (in both good and bad ways).  there's not much of a coherent plot.  it's needlessly fragmentary.  some of the sentences are beautiful, and sometimes it veers into purple prose.

anyways, not thrilled about that cheap ending ...