i don’t understand why we couldn’t be here for the relationship building but we’re there for the smut .i don’t get why we had meet dex at new york. also dex doesn’t meet darcy until thirty five percent. we spend so much time with characters from previous books or our mcs thinking about them and it’s like why are we not spending time building this relationship since those ppl had their own? basically pacing issue. 

the use of many words to describe simple things was annoying. all the characters were in there head too much.

i didn’t care for darcy and max scares me. the only person i was rooting for was dex. i find that in mmf/rh w mm the women are neglected and not in the way most ppl complain about. i enjoy mm v much in poly/rh bec other wise it’s “unrealistic” to me. the neglect come from the mfc getting insta loved while the guys actually get some level of relationship building. usually it bec the guys have a reason or two to avoid each other. in this case dex having issues with his coming out was some form storyline but with darcy she’s amazing so duh was the vibe. it was the same for dex but at least there was something.

anyway i liked them together bec dex does so in that sense it worked.