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A review by caiacassiopeia
So Wrong by Avril Ashton

emotional tense
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character

4.0


Spoiler for the full story, so only click if you read it 🤝

first of all, I appreciate AA in general for writing full length cest stories, it gives more depth to the angsty factor of being in that kind of relationship, what I honestly love! 
It was sometimes a bit OTT with the family drama, but I also thought it fit the narrative in some way 

I loved the “surprise the escort you booked is your brother” trope! 
The bribe was a surprise, I never would’ve guessed T would do it and  that  M would be totally fine-ish 😅 

I think I missed a bit more character descriptions of both MCs especially with them having so much sex, there would’ve time to describe some more body parts than just ass&cock 🤣 

I loved that women were not necessarily the “bad guys” here, even if Simone tried to push them later in the story.
it was a huge shock to find out your brothers are lovers and all, I also think it was good to see that she might be able to come around one day (even if it’s tough?) 

I hated Lionel with every fiber of my soul, I never would’ve guessed he had a PI and bribed Ms ex BF to leave him.

I loved how T stood up for himself and called L out for all his bullshit and being a shit father! 

 It’s funny how L is basically “the reason” his sons found each other hehehe #karma

My heart broke for the kids, when the mom died, I predicted something like that at some point in the story, but I’m sad it ended with death 😞

The sex was hot, I loved how M as the bigger brother was so needy 🤌