This gave me nightmares about my work, haha. It's not badly written per se, just that the subject matter is something I see almost every day ad nauseam, being an engineer at a factory. The use of punctuation as a stand-in for "product" is a bit awkward, but I suppose something structured as a fable needs not be deep at every aspect. I read this at a good time and I have a good memory associated with reading this.