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A review by nixwolfwood
Moving Forward by Emily R. Pearson
3.0
I was given this book in exchange for an honest review.
First of all, I would like to state that this was very impressive for this author's first published story. I had a hard time putting it down, because I found myself absorbed in the story.
That being said, it has a lot of issues with its editing and needs a lot of work, both with content and grammar. In many cases the story was so interesting that I almost didn't notice them, but there were enough that they still stood out despite that.
The characters were, for the most part, realistic and helped keep me drawn into the story as I read. Again, there were content issues - mostly where the author would contradict herself - so it would put me off.
All and all, I did enjoy this story and I would like to read more from her. I do highly suggest to invest in a good editor, because this story has a lot of potential.
http://www.platypire.com/3/post/2014/03/moving-forward.html
First of all, I would like to state that this was very impressive for this author's first published story. I had a hard time putting it down, because I found myself absorbed in the story.
That being said, it has a lot of issues with its editing and needs a lot of work, both with content and grammar. In many cases the story was so interesting that I almost didn't notice them, but there were enough that they still stood out despite that.
The characters were, for the most part, realistic and helped keep me drawn into the story as I read. Again, there were content issues - mostly where the author would contradict herself - so it would put me off.
All and all, I did enjoy this story and I would like to read more from her. I do highly suggest to invest in a good editor, because this story has a lot of potential.
http://www.platypire.com/3/post/2014/03/moving-forward.html