you know i’ve been ignoring some delulu statements in this series for four books and i have to get off my chest. these ppl are not good ppl. i don’t care if they protect each other. i don’t care if they have some weird moral code. it’s acab over here on my end all day everyday but let’s not act like they are any better. they literally kill ppl over nothing. lose their shit over name calling. this book really tried convince me that hart was better in the mafia. lol how about idk work in security? go back to school? mechanics? comp sci? literally anything else! i felt the same about leo. it’s like can’t family members in the mafia have normal job? why must they all be killers?  

i am so anti pet names other than the usual babe love dear once in while. i am esp anti “queen”. it’s gag worthy! i can’t. it makes it so cheesy. i literally dnfed a fantasy series bec the guy bowed down to his “queen” the mfc whi was burning down a boat to free herself and couldn’t control it. apparently she had some powers of legends or prophecy. something like that. i found it cringey despite her actually being powerful. basically “queen” being said in contemporary romance makes me want to hurl.

okay so smut…i know in the previous book i said it was the authors style. it was to much. i think i’ve read erotica with less. the story basically went as follows someone tried to kill them then sex then shopping then sex then a date then sex then someone tried to follow them then sex then they buy her more stuff then sex and on and on. it’s been like this for all four books which is why this author will be on my don’t read list. i like the fact that everyone is together. i actually prefer every one being together over pure rh(basically mfc being only focus) but i can’t do sex over plot.. i want the sex scene to mean something. if it’s used too much then it has no use to the story. also the brother being in the same harem was gross. i skipped many sex scene but i couldn’t even do the brothers talking about it let alone the actual act of them being in an orgy together.

the main plot was doing too much and too little. the threat didn’t give threatening like r2r. hell the cliffhanger from the book before this was whatever. the perez brothers and micah seemed even less of mafia leaders than les and she was such a let down.

i don’t like evie. i don’t like les. i don’t like the little bit of bridget that i got. i love women friendships and when they are done well it makes my heart sing. all we got is women giggling about men. please…

 

over all i was entertained enough to finish which can’t be said for a lot of other books. i will not cont.