Just wasn’t connecting with me.  The style was very bland snd a bit clunky.  I knew I was in trouble about 3 sentences in when I had to read it about 5 times to parse what the character was saying.  

The use of non-binary pronouns and not using genders seemed haphazard.   The dragon referred to himself as "male" and "he/him" but referred to female humans as "having mammary glands".  I'm not quite sure what the reason was?  Maybe I didn’t reach that explanation yet?  It was just odd.  I think I needed more "rules" up front than what I got.