Certainly lacks subtlety, right out the gate the protagonist drops every inch of backstory they possibly can on the reader. Short stories can be difficult to craft well given the limited time available but spelling out absolutely everything isn't the solution

The concept itself is pretty solid, supernatural goings on at an old golden era Hollywood movie studio and the expert fixer who has to deal with these events on top of their other more mundane duties. It's just unfortunate that the writing is so clunky and overly explanatory.