This one is a 3.5 for me.....

My Huge Niggles!!!!

1st

Gwen Watching a reaper inspecting things from a cabinet and stowing them safely away before finally jumping out "To stop them" and have them run away.... Why not interrupt the Inspection... before the reaper got their hands on the stuff???

2nd

Gloating over defeating Vivian, giving the whole speech about how she, Gwen has Won this time, but no Obviously that few minutes of unneeded Monologue gave Vivian's roc time to get to her....

A few More instances like that.... Had me and my young son's screaming at the car radio in exasperation.....

"Just shut up and get on with it!!!!"

Still I do love Most the characters, and the Authors way of writing is incredible.... Not to mention the world shes created.