They say, you should write about what you know, which is a good place to start. They also say, you should split up your sentences with commas, even if they're put in the wrong place, or shoved gratuitously any which way. They also say, anyone can be a writer, just shove it on kindle. None of these things actually contribute to a good book, however.

I mostly found the writing to be below par. At any time in one paragraph a character is referred to as Vic, Victor and Lieutenant Croft, though as I write this I can't for certain say that Croft is Vic and Victor, because the inconsistency was palatable and forceful. And, the amount of commas, was tremendous. And the plot, whilst an interesting premise, was slow and, coupled with the bad writing, was very difficult to follow.