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 Wow!! This was amazing!!

Fall of the Dragon King is an intriguing fantasy story with excellent world-building seamlessly woven into the plot.

This journey was captivating. A world filled with magic, intrigue, and the timeless struggle between good and evil. It starts with a gripping opening, immersing us in a richly detailed tapestry of characters and settings that are both mesmerizing and complex.

I loved the characters so much!!

FMC was great, she's strong yet a little stubborn.
Ghost is the perfect MMC, he's strong, mysterious, and swoon-worthy!!
I loved their budding romance.

-I'm not sure how I felt about the love triangle though... I do like Ty though!
-This definitely needed editing, misspelled words/ incorrect word usage, and maybe a little formatting
-One thing I really disliked was the use of quotations for character thoughts. It would have been better if their thoughts were italicized. The current setup makes it a little difficult to distinguish between dialogue and thoughts at times.


Besides these shortcomings, I really enjoyed the story!

❥moderate spice
❥enemies to lovers
❥forced prox
❥adventure
❥fae
❥talking dragons
❥shapshifters
❥magic

Thank you for the ARC, Shaquilla!
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 3.5 stars, rounded up 

initial thoughts:

this was a great debut! I absolutely loved both characters and their chemistry. I was completely captivated from page one, the way I DEVOURED THIS!!

-the spicy scenes were SO good!!
-characters felt a little too perfect, but also Amelia's inner struggles of getting too close to someone new, and possibly ending with heartache were so relatable
-I feel like both character's background was a little lacking
-Stalker Tori plotline was predictable/have read so many like it
-The ending felt rushed - after the hospital, we barely get to see Amelia's PDST/her progress, it's happening in the background, while we get Jameson's POVs, then his parents giving him land to build a house, etc. Fast forward weeks later, then months later, and finally 2 years later, and everything comes together in a way that wraps up the story well, but I feel like adding 100 pages to the story for Amelia's struggles, or maybe even getting Kat's PoV, would have been nice? maybe?
-needs slight surface-level editing but overall good

Overall, amazing debut with loveable relatable characters. Amelia and Jameson are one of my favourite couples!! Their budding romance was a delight to read.

full review soon? (might clean this up eventually)


Thank you for the ARC, Alexa<3


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 3 stars, full Review on my blog!

────── ✧ ⋆⋅☆⋅⋆ ♡ ⋆⋅☆⋅⋆ ✧ ──────

wait that's how it ended? will there be a second book??

slightly underwhelming, the whole book felt very rushed

It’s unique in a way and a great debut but I felt like I was reading and not processing the words, or maybe I just didn't connect with the characters since there were so many. There were so many things happening plot-wise that it was all crammed into 378 pages.

⪼When it came to the Trials part of the book, I was disappointed. They weren’t as high stakes as they seemed to be, our FMC breezed through them almost without a thought. I really feel like they could have gone differently. I mean they were entertaining enough but not as incredibly dangerous were meant to be.

IM SORRY BUT IN THE BOOK DESCRIPTION WHERE SAYS "her struggles through high-stakes trials" is literally false advertising 😭😭

⪼I didn't care for Aella and Raven's relationship because there wasn't enough build-up. Although it mentions they 'knew each other' from before, I would have liked to see more of them getting to know each other better. Their 'romance' lacked real tension or chemistry, despite the forbidden love angle.

⪼Every time I read the MMC's name-Raven, idk why but I kept thinking of Raven from The 100(<333 I lovvee her sm). But anyway, HE was... strange; gave weird vibes at times, like he was about to betray Aella or something.

Also, as the MMC he was lacking character development; we don’t get to know anything about him, he has no backstory, we don't even get to know his real name(only his given Songbird name). It felt like his only purpose in the book was to serve as Aella's stress relief because those are mainly the only times we got to see him.

His character was very mysterious, and I WISH we had his POV. That would have made him so much more interesting and we would have gotten to know him more.

⪼smut scenes felt awkward between them? Aella kept having to repeat herself 'it's just sex nothing more'... probably why they lacked chemistry because their relationship was more of a Friends-with-benefits

⪼I feel like I constantly had to keep referring to the glossary to even remember what things were:

Eagle: the leader of the Aviary and advisor to the King of the Sorrows
Tycheroi: fortunate ones – the common race in the Empyrieos. They are long-lived and blessed with soul magic by the gods.
Goiteía: an alphabet of marks used to tap into soul magic. The more one uses goiteía, the shorter their lifespan.
Goiteían: a person who sells the service of mark carving, or is in servitude to carve goiteía for another.

these are just a few, there were so many more words/names/Kingdoms/pronunciations in the glossary, and honestly, at one point I just stopped going back and forth accepting that I probably won't remember what the heck was being talked about.

⪼Xan, is an interesting character that I want to know more about, but his appearance felt rushed in a way.

THE CLIFFHANGER WAS SHOCKING AND SLIGHTLY CONFUSING. If there is a second book, I'll probably read it, because WHAT THE HECK XAN???!!

Overall, I'm not going to say I completely disliked this, but it was very underwhelming, and I feel like I need to read it again.

𝓉𝓇𝑜𝓅𝑒𝓈:
❥Spies
❥assassins & royals
❥a perilous heist
❥'high stakes' trials
❥forbidden romance
❥forced proximity
❥court intrigue
❥kingdom politics
❥Greek mythology


Thank you for the ARC, Braidee!
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