the repetitive lines & constant spelling mistakes are just a little annoying but the being constantly beaten over the head with the fatphobia & body shaming? fuck right the fuck off. thank you.
CW: gore, violence, blood, death, cancer, child abuse (sexual, physical, emotional: some implied, others on page), fatphobia, body shaming, villains can't be villains if they're not fat & ugly & some form of 'not normal looking' of course. and we gotta be reminded of it CONSTANTLY.
cw: blood, murder, death, kidnapping, unhelpful law enforcement, gaslighting, cancer, medical content, violence, casual ableism
this one was pretty good & kept my attention very well. a couple unanswered questions that big me, but nothing story-breaking overall. a bit repetitious at times, but not that much. will definitely read more from scissom in the future!
CW: car accident, hospitals, chronic illness, grief, fatphobia, body shaming, food shaming.
not a fan of how a short story can still be full of fatphobia & food/body shaming, and knowing how it ends makes it worse because the characters never going to realise his internalized issues so it's not mentioned how awful that mindset/belief is. either way, it wasn't as tense as I expected, but its not written terribly. I like how the end ties into other aspects of the short story, but ultimately this one wasn't for me.
it's labeled as horror, supernatural, a thriller but those don't actually feel right. suspense does, but ultimately, it's just sad. which is fine, I love sad stories, this one just wasn't marketed properly for my taste and I ended up with expectations that simply weren't met. would read more from this author in the future, though!