grumpy sunshine without the charm? slow burn is no issue, but make it interesting. all this list, but where is the YEARNING??? at 50%, i should be rooting for them, but i’m bored!!! where is the genuine desire, the longing gazes, the fleeting touches? everything is about how grouchy, jaded and horny he is, how innocent, sweet and overwhelmed she is, and zero chemistry in the midst of that. it’s gonna have to be a no from me. also, he’s a cornball!
she’s pathetic, he’s a lewser, and if i wanted to visualize everything they wore i’d pick up an issue of vogue. this isn’t 2014 wattpad. let’s be serious.