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beckyjsuth's review against another edition
4.0
A lot of complicated feelings on this one, and in the first quarter or so I did have to fight to not make myself DNF, but in the end, I came out feeling pretty positively about it.
Admittedly, part of my problems getting into this book, I think, are more to do with me than with the book. Generally speaking, I take a bit to get into fantasy books. They all use their own unique systems and languages, and I have trouble slogging through getting used to them. This book is no different, and it lays a lot of exposition down at the beginning, not all of which actually ended up feeling especially important to know. The first ~30 pages were hard to get through, and I don't think that's just me. That said, getting it all out right at the front did mean the rest of the book was easier to read because I had a pretty good understanding of this world.
I just really enjoyed the premise and how the plot unfolded in this book. Such a cool concept - a world where dragons are revered as gods, except that the gods hate humans for what they did to them? Delicious. Arcady and Everen's bond? Outstanding. Bonding through learning thievery and pulling off a heist? I'm here for it. Genuinely, there are few things more beautiful to me than the yearning of "I have to harm them but oops, I'm starting to care for them."
I've seen some people say that the different POVs were confusing to them, but honestly the different POVs actually helped my keep the chapters straight easier, and I honestly really enjoyed the Everen's chapters being directed specifically at Arcady, especially with the reveal at the very end of the book. But overall, I just really did enjoy Everen's voice in this novel. That said, I did not care for Sorin's chapters - it felt like they ground the momentum of Everen and Arcady's story to a halt whenever it switched to her story, and I feel like the information from her chapters was largely unnecessary.
There are a couple of things that did not work for me. First, the writing in some parts felt... Okay. It was almost like the prose was so focused on being atmospheric and/or poetic that it forgot there were ideas that needed to be conveyed, because I'd end up having to read some paragraphs over again. I also, while I love the concept of a queernormative setting where gender-neutral pronouns are assumed until stated otherwise, some of the discussion of gender in this book felt pretty heavy-handed. I understand it to an extent because it's newer for Everen, but also it felt a little like the author was taking an opportunity to talk about this to the reader, but I kind of assume most people who are reading this are already generally pretty inclusive? But that's also an assumption on my part.
Overall, a fun adventure and I'm looking forward to seeing where Arcady and Everen's story goes in the next two novels.
Admittedly, part of my problems getting into this book, I think, are more to do with me than with the book. Generally speaking, I take a bit to get into fantasy books. They all use their own unique systems and languages, and I have trouble slogging through getting used to them. This book is no different, and it lays a lot of exposition down at the beginning, not all of which actually ended up feeling especially important to know. The first ~30 pages were hard to get through, and I don't think that's just me. That said, getting it all out right at the front did mean the rest of the book was easier to read because I had a pretty good understanding of this world.
I just really enjoyed the premise and how the plot unfolded in this book. Such a cool concept - a world where dragons are revered as gods, except that the gods hate humans for what they did to them? Delicious. Arcady and Everen's bond? Outstanding. Bonding through learning thievery and pulling off a heist? I'm here for it. Genuinely, there are few things more beautiful to me than the yearning of "I have to harm them but oops, I'm starting to care for them."
I've seen some people say that the different POVs were confusing to them, but honestly the different POVs actually helped my keep the chapters straight easier, and I honestly really enjoyed the Everen's chapters being directed specifically at Arcady, especially with the reveal at the very end of the book. But overall, I just really did enjoy Everen's voice in this novel. That said, I did not care for Sorin's chapters - it felt like they ground the momentum of Everen and Arcady's story to a halt whenever it switched to her story, and I feel like the information from her chapters was largely unnecessary.
There are a couple of things that did not work for me. First, the writing in some parts felt... Okay. It was almost like the prose was so focused on being atmospheric and/or poetic that it forgot there were ideas that needed to be conveyed, because I'd end up having to read some paragraphs over again. I also, while I love the concept of a queernormative setting where gender-neutral pronouns are assumed until stated otherwise, some of the discussion of gender in this book felt pretty heavy-handed. I understand it to an extent because it's newer for Everen, but also it felt a little like the author was taking an opportunity to talk about this to the reader, but I kind of assume most people who are reading this are already generally pretty inclusive? But that's also an assumption on my part.
Overall, a fun adventure and I'm looking forward to seeing where Arcady and Everen's story goes in the next two novels.
ambermarie1915's review against another edition
adventurous
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
cm524's review against another edition
3.0
Meh. It was fantasy, and I'm a general lover of dragons. Not reallllly sold on the romance part of it. I appreciated that their was more build-up to it than other books I've read, but at the same time So Much was happening plot-wise that it still felt a little rushed. idk. Appreciated the diversity, though I found the capitalized honorifics unnecessarily distracting... Maybe that's just me. I am half-committed to reading the sequel.
lexicorona's review against another edition
adventurous
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
fuzzycerts's review against another edition
adventurous
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
2.75
moonisav's review against another edition
lighthearted
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.25
*post read clarity changed my review to 3.25*
I have a lot of mixed feelings about this book, but overall it was fun, magical, and full of potential for further exploration of the world it takes place in.
I say this as kindly as I can, but my first and immediate thought upon starting the book was that it read like an adult-fantasy version of Warrior Cats. Just replace the cats with dragons. I can't lie, this made it really hard for me to get invested because I just couldn't take it seriously. I think my issue is that one of the main POVs is from a dragon, and his speech patterns/internal monologue was pretty much identical to a human's, except it was about dragon things. I don't really know if this makes sense, but I felt like I was reading about a person who was pretending to be a dragon. If I'm reading from the POV of a non-human species, I wouldn't expect them to explain things unique to their species' culture in such a human way. The POV being in first person (along with this character's surname being "emberclaw", which is the most Warrior Cats thing I've heard in ages) probably also didn't help. This definitely won't be an issue for everyone, so any potential readers should take it with a grain of salt. I normally love stories that are whimsical and improbable and outlandish and magical, so it's not that. Dragons are my favorite mythical creature, so it wasn't that either. Regardless, this was a significant hurdle that took about 100 pages to clear.
HOWEVER, once I was able to get into this story, I couldn't stop reading. There's so much history to the world and to both of the main characters, and the societal structure is very interesting. The MCs have great chemistry together and are fun to watch. I loved that this book was whimsical but still covered more adult themes, and the internal monologues were funny and distinct for each character.
I have to admit, I wasn't the biggest fan of Sorin as an added POV. Don't get me wrong, I loved the concept of her character. She's someone who I would absolutely read a separate book about, but I kept getting annoyed when her chapters would pop up, especially because they weren't really necessary to understand the plot. I could see her being very important later in the series, and her POV certainly added more depth to the world/long term plot points, but for this book I didn't find her scenes very impactful or relevant to the MCs. I have this issue with most multi-pov books though, so it may just be personal preference.
I agree with other reviews here that the book was slow for the first 2/3 and then took off at full speed for the last 1/3, but I was having fun throughout so I still enjoyed myself. I was torn between rating this 3.5, 3.75, or 4. Personally, I don't want to pick up any book if I see it has less than four stars. However, I also enjoy most books I read while simultaneously feeling that they don't deserve a full 4, so my system is completely nonsensical and emotion based. In the end, I'm rating Dragonfall 4⭐️ because I want there to be enough momentum for the author to finish the series (so much potential for growth and depth!) and also I don't want other people to avoid reading because it ended up with less than that (even though I know my one review is just a drop in the bucket). Maybe think of it as 3.75 quality with an added .25 for the fact I would recommend it to someone as a fun, light read.
I have a lot of mixed feelings about this book, but overall it was fun, magical, and full of potential for further exploration of the world it takes place in.
I say this as kindly as I can, but my first and immediate thought upon starting the book was that it read like an adult-fantasy version of Warrior Cats. Just replace the cats with dragons. I can't lie, this made it really hard for me to get invested because I just couldn't take it seriously. I think my issue is that one of the main POVs is from a dragon, and his speech patterns/internal monologue was pretty much identical to a human's, except it was about dragon things. I don't really know if this makes sense, but I felt like I was reading about a person who was pretending to be a dragon. If I'm reading from the POV of a non-human species, I wouldn't expect them to explain things unique to their species' culture in such a human way. The POV being in first person (along with this character's surname being "emberclaw", which is the most Warrior Cats thing I've heard in ages) probably also didn't help. This definitely won't be an issue for everyone, so any potential readers should take it with a grain of salt. I normally love stories that are whimsical and improbable and outlandish and magical, so it's not that. Dragons are my favorite mythical creature, so it wasn't that either. Regardless, this was a significant hurdle that took about 100 pages to clear.
HOWEVER, once I was able to get into this story, I couldn't stop reading. There's so much history to the world and to both of the main characters, and the societal structure is very interesting. The MCs have great chemistry together and are fun to watch. I loved that this book was whimsical but still covered more adult themes, and the internal monologues were funny and distinct for each character.
I have to admit, I wasn't the biggest fan of Sorin as an added POV. Don't get me wrong, I loved the concept of her character. She's someone who I would absolutely read a separate book about, but I kept getting annoyed when her chapters would pop up, especially because they weren't really necessary to understand the plot. I could see her being very important later in the series, and her POV certainly added more depth to the world/long term plot points, but for this book I didn't find her scenes very impactful or relevant to the MCs. I have this issue with most multi-pov books though, so it may just be personal preference.
I agree with other reviews here that the book was slow for the first 2/3 and then took off at full speed for the last 1/3, but I was having fun throughout so I still enjoyed myself. I was torn between rating this 3.5, 3.75, or 4. Personally, I don't want to pick up any book if I see it has less than four stars. However, I also enjoy most books I read while simultaneously feeling that they don't deserve a full 4, so my system is completely nonsensical and emotion based. In the end, I'm rating Dragonfall 4⭐️ because I want there to be enough momentum for the author to finish the series (so much potential for growth and depth!) and also I don't want other people to avoid reading because it ended up with less than that (even though I know my one review is just a drop in the bucket). Maybe think of it as 3.75 quality with an added .25 for the fact I would recommend it to someone as a fun, light read.
hannjuli's review against another edition
emotional
mysterious
sad
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
freyakavanagh's review against another edition
adventurous
mysterious
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? N/A
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
2.25
unknown_fae's review against another edition
adventurous
challenging
tense
slow-paced
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
3.5
marchelos's review against another edition
adventurous
emotional
informative
mysterious
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? N/A
5.0